Twinkling stars
I’m in the garden and I see the stars winking at me in the starry sky the moon comes out from behind a fluffy cloud.
The moon, shined so bright it nearly blinded me. It started to rain very lightly I felt it touch me, it felt coldish I saw eight stars in a little groop. I heard some rustling I thought that it was a bird I looked but it was a weka I took a step I scared it.
Phoebe.
Wow Pheobe, Ka mau te wehi! What an amazing poem. I love how you have really describe the sky, it has made me imagine sitting in my garden staring up at the sky. Maybe next time you could read your work out loud to check that you have put in all your punctuation.
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